2) What scene did you first put down?
Sienca. I started right at the beginning to figure out HOW, and then let everything spiral from that point. 🙂
What’s your favorite line of narration?
uhmmmmhummm. Not sure I have a favorite, but this one is nice:
trailed him all the way back to their quarters, and it had nothing to do with
the young man suddenly remembering proper protocol. If it weren’t for Jedi training, Qui-Gon
suspected that Obi-Wan would have been gaping outright.
Qui-Gon glanced back to check on his Padawan, the boy’s eyes were darting around,
taking in all aspects of Temple architecture and life. Qui-Gon had the distinct impression that
Obi-Wan was trying valiantly not to stare at each passing member of the Order.
reached their quarters without incident, a fact that left Qui-Gon releasing a
quiet sigh of relief. He wasn’t certain
that Obi-Wan would be able to handle curiosity from friends right now. Hell, Qui-Gon didn’t think that he was up to
questions yet, either.
inside, Obi-Wan stopped dead in his tracks.
Then, before Qui-Gon could say a word, he proceeded to touch everything.
watched, realizing he was witnessing an intense act of re-familiarization. There was nothing in the common room that was
not investigated, by quick touch or by being picked up and explored with nimble
Those marvelous shields Obi-Wan now possessed let
nothing slip, but Qui-Gon could read body language when no other options
existed. His Padawan was deeply upset, disturbed
by everything surrounding him, and shaken by his meeting with the Council.
4) “Panic is for when the crisis has passed.”
Nice! And that’s one of my favorite bits of narration, too, actually! I usually end up re-reading that bit once or twice every time I get to it. ^_^